Wolfy's Poetry Writing.

Discussion in 'Off Topic Discussion' started by Alpha Wolfy, Oct 23, 2014.

  1. Alpha Wolfy

    Alpha Wolfy Nocturnal VIP

    Hello people of STTT. Some of you know that I am an avid poem writer. I have been writing poems since I was in the 5th grade. Poetry is basically just an mechanism for me to express how i feel on stuff.I think I will just post poems on different topics or you guys can give me ideas on what to write about in future poems. I wrote this poem below when I was in my ELA class, doing absolutely nothing. Give me your thoughts, ideas and suggestions. Sincerely, Wolfy :D
    Feeling of Freefall
    Spiraling through the cotton-feeling clouds
    Never stopping until i hit the ground
    Reaching rock bottom
    to the catacombs of the opposite of cloud 9
    I slow to a stop
    Way past knee deep of dirt
    I lay and drench the new habit
    Embrace the new vision till I bore of it
    Time & Time Again...
    I crawl to the top
    Try is a better word to say
    Each struggle and slip
    Empowers me
    Strengthens to break the barrier
    The barrier between toxic and sobriety
    My figures appears from the hole
    As I touch a zillion watts with my hand
    I gain the familiar feeling back
    The feeling of the darkness draining
    Leaving room for a new beginning of prosperity
    My eyes gleam the sun with hope
    Smirking it with a hardy stare
    As my mind leans on the horizon of improvement
    With the new way of me
    A new skin is gained
    Like a reptile that shredded its old skin
     
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  2. Killamarshall

    Killamarshall Hmm... interesting.. Smite anyone?? VIP

    interesting
     
  3. Husky

    Husky Euthanasia VIP Silver

    I did not know you wrote poetry. I still write some poetry here and there. :3
     
  4. AnarkisT

    AnarkisT ★ No Gods, No Masters. ★ VIP Silver Emerald

    This isn't Graphics =P
     
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  5. Alpha Wolfy

    Alpha Wolfy Nocturnal VIP

    I guess Poetry isn't considered artistic talent : \ . Ok. This was moved to Off-Topic Discussion.
     
  6. Mr. Disco

    Mr. Disco Jeff Lynne is a musical genius. VIP

    It says "Graphics" not "Artistic talents" although I like the idea. Maybe make "Artistic talents" and a subform of "Graphics," "Writing," and "Art" :)
     
  7. Alpha Wolfy

    Alpha Wolfy Nocturnal VIP

    I may start posting a new poem every Saturday starting next week
     
  8. kynwall

    kynwall "Painting Roses" VIP

    Omgosh you do poetry as well? You're not bad either! :D :D :D
     
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  9. @VonDicey Time to do a GLA.
    Anyways this poem is interesting. Imma watch this :)
     
  10. Machinekiller00

    Machinekiller00 I <3 Gunter VIP Silver

    Such inspiration much deep
     
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